THE FLYING COW
I was outside rounding up the cow´s into the cowshed for milking when I saw this thing flying around quite low. I looked down shook my head and looked up again, I still saw it ¨ What is that thing?¨ I said out loud to the cow´ s. But of course the cow´s wouldn't answer I though but then I heard an answer ¨I´m not sure.¨ ¨How's that ¨ I said loudly ¨me¨ said a voice ¨where are you¨ ¨I'm a cow¨ ¨come closer.¨ As she started walking to me she said ¨Hop on ¨ so I got on and we flew off into the sky of the magical land.
By Abbie
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