The God of War
Kratos is the god of war but he hasn't always been the god of war, he was once just a child in Greece with his mother and brother and his new dog. “When did it arrive” he said to his mother consistently. His brother Demos had a birthmark and wasn't as strong as Kratos. Demos was a weakling and the weaklings went to a frosty mountain where they were expected to die. When the guards came to take Demos, Kratos wouldn't let them. So he tried to train him to be strong. In the middle of one of there trainings the god of death kidnapped demos and trapped him forever.
hi blake
ReplyDeleteI liked your story and how Kratos saved his brother Demos from going to the frosty mountain to die
from Ava
Great story Blake, you really tackled this challenge well! I especially like the part about the guards coming because it seems to be the crux of the story! Watch out for nouns such as 'God'- remember to put a capital letter!
ReplyDeleteAmusing story Blake, some great explanation a story. Just toch up on your explanation.
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