Thursday, June 7, 2018

100 wc Wk #34 Mason

In the cold misty morning I wake up and go to my window and see pink fluffy unicorns and a bridge in the paddock with pink fluffy unicorns on it with recently planted daffodils everywhere with a huge pink fluffy unicorn in the middle of the lot of them so I call the pound then that can't fit them in the pound the pink fluffy unicorns take over the world then I wake up from a dream.

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