Tuesday, June 26, 2018

100wc #37 Lucy

It had been raining all night.
It had been raining all morning.
It was going to rain all day…

Molly, Holly and Bill were friends. Molly had invited Holly and Bill over for her Birthday. They were going to sleep outside that night but it had started raining cats and dogs.
“You can still toast marshmallows in the fireplace and sleep on the Living room floor, Molly.” her Mum had said.
“But it won’t be the same Mum!” cried Molly.
“Yeah Molly’s Mum!” said Bill
“Sorry kids but you can’t” said Molly’s Dad.
“Look it’s stopped raining!” said the kids.

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1 comment:

  1. AnonymousJune 28, 2018 at 2:12 PM

    Hi Lucy i like how you put it had been raining cats and dogs and how you left me thinking at the end great job.
    From Ava

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