Tuesday, June 12, 2018
The weird death Notch #35
I was 5 when my Dad died. I don't know what happened to him. I was crying desperately for like a day or so. The next day i saw a camera, in are living room where my Dad died, so I went into my Mums room. She told me about the camera, and she said the control room is at the end at the hallway. I went there and I replayed the day when my dad died. However, she couldn’t believe what she had done. She said to herself ¨I was sleepwalking and killed my father.¨ ¨I am sorry Dad, it wan't my choice.
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I like the way how your mum was sorry for what she had done
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