Tuesday, June 26, 2018

notch week 37

¨Waakkkeee uuuppp,¨ my mom was shouting like a dinosaur, so i woke up and i ligitlety fell of my bed and it had been raining all morning so i got out, got change got my breakfast and played Roblox on this server called epic minigames and i saw some of my 42 friends on roblox were playing and i played about like 20 games on the server epic minigames and you could level up from wins and it was still raining and yeah.

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