Tuesday, June 26, 2018

100wcweek37Issy m

“Ugh!Daddy help!”Yelled sally.
“What is it honey.”Ask sally's dad.
 “Look at all of the worms. That is just gross!”Said sally.
“Don't do that I thought someone died.”Explained sally dads.
It had been raining all morning and there were worms everywhere.
“Get them daddy.Get Them I don't like them.”yelled sally.
“Honey don't be scared.They wont hurt you.”said sally's dad.
“ok but still get them.”
“Your a funny little girl.Such  a funny little girl.”said sally's dad.
by Issy m

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