Thursday, June 7, 2018

100wc #34 Lucy

She walked over the sprinkled bridge it was dotted with all the bright and happy colors you could think of. She didn’t know where she was going because she was just walking along the bridge. Then without a warning she stopped then she looked around down and up and when she looked up she saw a huge pink daffodil. She longed to climb it once she saw it then like the world read her thoughts she started flying up towards it the she landed with a soft thud. She felt very tired so she lay down and fell asleep.



1 comment:

  1. I really like the way you described the bridge maybe next time think about reading it out loud before you post it.

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