“What is it” Mum replied
“It smashed” I said as a tear ran down my cheek
Sally had been given a ornament from her Grand Pop before he passed away and she was cleaning up her room and she knocked it off with he duster… however, she couldn’t believe what she had done…
“What do I do?” Sally asked.
“I don't know what you can do know that it is broken” Mum replied.
“Please don't tell Nanna i broke it”
“I’ll have to see about that” Mum said mysteriously.
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