Today was the day I was allowed to get a puppy. But it was massive. I said to my Mum that if only it was a bit smaller I would love it but this dog is gonna grow way too big. Can I get a new one please? NO! My Mum said she paid $200 for this dog and she could not bring it back without a receipt but for the pet store we got the dog from there's NO receipt. So NO! NO! NO! She said that this is now my pet dog. Sadly now I have a giant dog in my house.
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