“Pack your bags we're going on a picnic” mum said
“Uhhh really it's so embarrassing do we have to wear those white things”
“Yes its no big deal”
I pack my camera because I had a feeling I would catch something amazing .
“Hey Lucy, you can’t catch me,” my brother says .
Oh really
Get off the table, I say.
“NO”
I jump up onto the table all of a sudden we fall to the ground.
Why am I so small ?
Bzzzzzz bang something landed in front of us i take photos
“It looks like a bee”
“Leave his leg”
Then ...
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