Thursday, November 19, 2020

100WC - Week #11 - Charlie

 We were going downtown rolling in the car and leaves were crashing into the car bang crash.  There was a big white castle right beside us. There were Crafty people walking out of the door. We locked the door. They were running after us. We were going over the speed limit but we just needed to get away from them. But we just stopped they were knocking on the door and let us in. People are trying to get us. So the jumped in . We speed down the road but we are still speeding we got away from them just in time 


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