I was with my family at a funeral in Coromandel. Then suddenly the ground started to shake. Then someone screams “EARTHQUAKE!” we scream in terror hiding under chairs. Then it gets worse… it was CHAOS. Then we all here a voice the same person that yelled earthquake then saw something horrifying a tsunami we didn't know what to do so we just ran up the hill water rising we made it we voided the tsunami the earthquake stopped. We rented a hotel. I slept in my sweaty clothes. But then my clothes changed and ...i didnt remember putting it on...
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