Wednesday, November 4, 2020

100WC week #9 Ella

 This creature is real, what does this mean? This means that someone has made a big position to make stuff bigger so the person or people that have made this has tried it on a bee or more bees. Some people are trying to figure out who did this. This is one news on tv as i turn off the tv i tell mum i wonder who made it? I don't know what sweetie she replied, dinner is ready, what are we having for dinner, we are having macaroni and cheese . Yumm!!! I yell please don't yell in the house my mum exclaimed ok sorry mum its ok sweetie. 

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