“Uh….WHAT ON EARTH IS THAT?!” Yelled Johnny.
“What’s what?” Asked Tim.
“Are you crazy!? Can you not see it?” Said Tim, looking up into the air.
“O-” Tim started.
But it was too late, ‘THE THING’ was already flying towards them. Tim and Johnny were on a wooden table, and they decided to make a plan fast. They started jumping up and down on a spot on the table, ‘THE THING’ came right down and died on the table. Jimmy pulled a leg on ‘THE THING’.
“I have discovered….it’s a bee!”
“ I already knew that! Obviously... ” Said Tim
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