Wednesday, November 4, 2020

100WC - Week #9 - Madison

 Bzzz…  Bzzz…  Bzzz…

“What’s that?” I said to my friend looking up towards the sky.

“What’s what?” She replied.

“That buzzi-” I was interrupted by the noise again.

Bzzz…  Bzzz…  Bzzz…

Then it fell to the floor in front of me.  It was huge!

“I think it’s… dead,” I said.

I picked up a stick and prodded it cautiously, it didn’t move.  I poked it again.  It woke up and hovered in the air as if motioning for us to get on.

My friend and I smiled at each other and hopped on for the ride of our lives… 


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  1. AnonymousNovember 4, 2020 at 2:52 PM

    Hi madison i liked how you yused big words in your story.

    By Carla

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