Max and I were weeding the garden minding our own business. Just then we saw a bee, So we decided to say hi to it.
I went up to touch it and then that's when it hit me. A shook shivering down my body, feeling like I was getting smaller and smaller. “HEY MAX!!!!!” I shouted “huh? Oh harry is that you?!” max said “YES!” I said.
just then max touched the bee and became small the bee started to die, “hey look I found a camera!” max said “cool!” I said we took a picture and grew back to normal...
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