One day I was rolling around in the leaves minding my own business with my dog. Just then a man snatched my dog right out of my hands, “NO!” I shouted as I sprinted to get my dog back “WHERE IS MY PHONE?!” I said panicking and confused. “Shoot, I left it at home!” I said. just then I found a white pole and string “good thing i'm crafty” I said. I tied a knot in the string and pulled it tight on the pole and took that with me. Then I found the man in a castle and spun the pole around knocked him out, and got my dog back.
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