“Oh shoot!” I said as I was running to get my suit. “Finally” I made it. “Ok activate suit” Thanos has striked down and terrorising the city! “Yes Joe said my robot helper.” As I left the building and bashed out in my suit I flew out in the city and I saw but I didn’t remember putting it on him… “Guess thanos got an upgrade too on his armour I said” “I need to get my friends like hulk and dr. strange.” But just then as I was flying to get dr. strange and hulk I got blasted by a purple laser. Thanos zapped me!
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