In my mind I was thinking I couldn't get out of it alive,
But Little did I know…...
We were on holiday, happily minding our own business.
When all of a sudden a giant bee fell out of the sky, landing on my friend.
I struggled to get it off, I backed away.
It slowly crawled off him, before it started to gap it towards me.
Slowly backing away, I tripped over my suitcase.
My friend stood up, and ran to get his camera.
He took a picture, the beast backed off.
It fell to the ground, I ran, and never stopped
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