The old scary house
"Hey Jake, I dare you to go to that old creepy house down the road." “why”. because. Just do it “okay I'll do it don't yell at me then” Jake started walking down the road to the scary house. “I'm right behind you Jake” he walks up to the door and... BOO!!! “Ahhhhh!” “ Gosh you scared me, don't do that again.” “Ok” “ mmm zombie” “ run!!! " Oh and don't get caught” “ so what will he do if we get caught?” “ He will probably eat our brains and leave us on the side of the road for our parents to see us...
Thursday, February 27, 2020
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