Thursday, February 27, 2020

100WC #22 - Kate

The storms were rolling in. I was walking past a house, when lighting struck that  house. I started to run home, when Sammy came running across the road. Hay Kate did you see that house we should go in.  “Really”, “Yes", ''fine ". But first I gotta go and get my raincoat. As I go to get my raincoat, mum says “ I've got to walk the dog if you want to play with Sammy”.  Fine mum. When we got back a went straight to that house. We slowly approach the door. We opened it. It was dark. No one was there, the door shut!
By -
Labels:

2 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 5, 2020 at 10:49 AM

    Hi Katie I really liked your story. Maybe next time you can watch for capitals. What hapens next

    ReplyDelete
  2. AnonymousMarch 9, 2020 at 3:42 PM

    Hi Kate awesome story love the passion in it. Maybe next time use your capitals amazing cliff hanger.
    Addion. :)

    ReplyDelete

I really liked . . . because . . .
I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .

I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
Think about adding . . .
Have you thought about . . .
To improve your . . . try . . .
Perhaps you could . . .

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)
  • 100WC - Week #26 - Kate
    I was in Sydney on my yearly visit.  When the sun went down. I was trying to feel my way back to my apartment.  When something pulled me bac...
  • 100 WC Week #33 by Zak
    One day there was a  spiky fruit up in the tree, there was two big spiky fruits.  I wondered “What is in that spiky fruit? “Maybe there...
  • 100WC Week #29 - All of Room 4's Posts
    Our first time writing for 100WC This weeks prompt words are... shouted     crimson   misty frantically   grave ...