Monday, February 24, 2020

100WC - Week #22 - Milah

It's Halloween and we are going trick or treating. There is a spooky house up ahead and we go to it. There is a big wooden door with a doorbell. I wonder what lies behind that door. My finger goes to press the doorbell.
SWOOSH the door opens. There is a big angry warthog. I don’t feel safe.I run. As fast as I have ever run before.
“Wait!” the warthog says.  “I Have candy!” It yells again. I stop.
“Candy?” I say to myself. “CANDY!”  I ran back. The warthog winks.
“I got you”

And it pulls me inside.
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 24, 2020 at 12:52 PM

    Hi Milah,
    I like how you ended your story with a cliffhanger, what inspired you to do it on Halloween?
    From Mia

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 24, 2020 at 1:01 PM

    To Milah,
    Wow Milah that is a really good story.
    I really liked the end!
    From Madi

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