Tuesday, February 4, 2020

100WC - Week #19 - Madison

I was walking beside my horse Mocha out in the woods when I realized that her saddle was missing. “Oh no,” I muttered underneath my breath.
I had got that saddle for my 10th birthday.                                                                                              On the way back we found Mocha’s saddle squashed on the road so I decided that the next day I would buy a new one.

I woke up early Saturday morning to go buy a new saddle and maybe a new bridle as well.                    I got into town and although it was Saturday nothing was open.                                                          I decided I would solve this mystery by myself.

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  1. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2020 at 3:05 PM

    Hello Madison,
    that was an amazing story I loved the hint of sadness when you see the squashed up saddle on the road. I was wondering who got you the new saddle and how old it is? Is this story based on a true story or a book you have read ? Keep on writing.
    From Bailee

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2020 at 3:05 PM

    Hi Madison,I really enjoyed your story how did Mocha's saddle go missing?. why did you solve the mystery by yourself? didn't you want help by your mum or dad. this story is very original and fantastic! the full stops and capital letters are in perfect place's. what did the saddle look like? was it just an ordinary saddle?-Xaveika

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