Tuesday, February 11, 2020
100WC#week-20-Taisha
It was a late afternoon when I was walking my friend home. We did not know how far it would be from my house . Look at that cool sunset i said , That's so cool we need to take a picture , so we took a lot of pictures and then started to walk on . When we were walking my friend said look a bird is coming towards us, As it flew towards us I couldn't see what it was, mmm i don't think that a bird maybe its a pig said my friend don't be silly it can't be a flying pig.
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Hi Taisha i really like your writing keep it up from Ella
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you thought about what It could be
ReplyDeletekeep on the good work
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Harlan
Hi Taisha
ReplyDeleteWhat colors were the sunset?.
It was funny when you thought the bird was a pig!.
From, Milah.