Tuesday, February 4, 2020

100WC-week # 19 Taisha

It was Saturday and the sun was shining . I was wondering what to do. So I asked one of my friends to come over. What should we do? I asked my friend,  let's go downtown to the warehouse  . So we started to walk .  When we got to the warehouse   it was shut so we went to another shop and saw that it was closed .We looked around and everything was closed .  Although it was Saturday nothing was open said my friend. Maybe it's a public holiday .Let's go home so we walked home, then asked mum if it's a public holiday.
By -
Labels:

1 comment:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2020 at 3:30 PM

    Hi Taisha,I love how the sun was shining. what did you want to buy at the warehouse? why did you go with your friend? your writing is very unique. and I love how it was a public holiday-Xaveika

    ReplyDelete

I really liked . . . because . . .
I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .

I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
Think about adding . . .
Have you thought about . . .
To improve your . . . try . . .
Perhaps you could . . .

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)
  • 100WC - Week #26 - Kate
    I was in Sydney on my yearly visit.  When the sun went down. I was trying to feel my way back to my apartment.  When something pulled me bac...
  • 100 WC Week #33 by Zak
    One day there was a  spiky fruit up in the tree, there was two big spiky fruits.  I wondered “What is in that spiky fruit? “Maybe there...
  • 100WC Week #29 - All of Room 4's Posts
    Our first time writing for 100WC This weeks prompt words are... shouted     crimson   misty frantically   grave ...