Tuesday, February 11, 2020

100WC - Week #20 - Madison

Me and my brother Tyler had gone for a walk downtown to get the groceries when I saw something, I thought it was a bird but as it flew towards us I couldn’t see what it was.                                             “Duck,” I yelled to Tyler.                                                                                                                      When it had flew past I took a quick picture of it with my phone.                                                          We carried on following it until it just vanished into thin air.                                                                  “Where did it go?” I asked Tyler.                                                                                                              “No clue,” he said.                                                                                                                                    “It just vanished into thin air,” I said.                                                                                                        We went back home and told Mum.                                                                                                      “That's interesting,”Mum said questioningly.

2 comments:

  1. Hi Madison I liked your story because it had capital letters in it and I enjoyed reading it cool story.from Carla

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