Tuesday, February 11, 2020
100WC - Week #20 - Madison
Me and my brother Tyler had gone for a walk downtown to get the groceries when I saw something, I thought it was a bird but as it flew towards us I couldn’t see what it was. “Duck,” I yelled to Tyler. When it had flew past I took a quick picture of it with my phone. We carried on following it until it just vanished into thin air. “Where did it go?” I asked Tyler. “No clue,” he said. “It just vanished into thin air,” I said. We went back home and told Mum. “That's interesting,”Mum said questioningly.
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Hi Madison I liked your story because it had capital letters in it and I enjoyed reading it cool story.from Carla
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