Tuesday, February 25, 2020
Hayden - 100WC - Week #22
It's Halloween me and my friends Milly and Kate are at the creepiest house in town, "Maybe we should just go home now we've already got so much candy," I said but Milly and Kate wanted to see what it looks like inside. We walked up to the creepy old door and rung the doorbell. no one answered the door Milly rung it a second time no one answered so I just said lets go and we turned around and started to walk home then the door started to creak we turned around very slowly and the door was opened it was pitch black in there an old man walked out.
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