Tuesday, February 4, 2020

100WC-week#19-Emily

Wait what is the date today and what is the  day What! Nothing is open although.Does the shop open on a Saturday. Wait yes yes it does open on a Saturday wait I could just go to Hamilton and shop there in the car I go. On ya just ya there are no shops open there. I just want to shop for a friend.            Although it was Saturday nothing was open. Wait what the date today. I will just get my phone and  no it's Sunday and then next weekend so I will just go shopping next week when the shop is open.


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  1. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2020 at 3:06 PM

    Good job Emily!
    I like how you started your story, Next time you write you should use more punctuation. By Mia.

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