Tuesday, February 4, 2020

100WC-week#19-Joe

It was  Saturday morning and I was minding my own business walking the street. But then I saw lots of places not open. I was wondering what was going on because I needed some tools at mitre 10. But it was closed too. So I had to go home and do something else instead. I just had a problem that everything was closed. I was so confused about it. This was a big problem. I just don’t understand! Why are the shops closed? This is weird well… I need to do something else  although I should just go back.hmm no I will relax.
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2020 at 3:04 PM

    hi Joe i really enjoyed reading your writing. keep it up from phoenix. don't give up on writing

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 11, 2020 at 3:09 PM

    Hi Joe
    i really liked your writing keep on trying!

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2020 at 12:06 PM

    Hi Joe
    I love how you used Mitre 10
    And what did you need the tools for?
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