Monday, February 10, 2020
100wc-week #20 -Ella
As it flew towards us i couldn't see what it was i was scared, happy ,sad ,amazed,coo,l hot and cold .I have so many emotions i don't know what to feel, was it a spaceship? An alien? Umm i don't know ! There it goes again, but this time it has red and blue stripes and it is yellow! i am getting so scared and happy at the same time. Now there's three in a row.... now five .....o my gosh i might faint .....no i am good for now but i need to sneeze....ah ah choo....yuck.
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Hi Ella,
ReplyDeletegreat job i liked the end bit.Keep up the great work!
From harry.
Thank you Harry for the nice comment i have commented on your writing i will keep my great work! up
ReplyDeletehi Ella,I really liked the part where you expressed your feelings in the story. why did you have to sneeze? Keep up the good work!-Xaveika
ReplyDeleteHi xaveika i dont know why i had to sneeze and thank you
ReplyDeleteI really liked your writing it was really cool and I liked how you said umm from Carla
ReplyDeletethanks carla
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