Silent Hall.
Me and my friends were walking down town when we saw something fly past us at incredible speeds.
Then we saw a really creepy house we looked at each other and nodded. We walked toward the house when we got closer we started to notice a dark figure standing at the door.
I recognised it instantly it was the thing that shot past us before.
As we got closer he vanished then some sort of portal opened up “What’s happening?” I yelled as we got pulled into it.
Then suddenly it was dead silence “where are we?” I asked my friend...
Me and my friends were walking down town when we saw something fly past us at incredible speeds.
Then we saw a really creepy house we looked at each other and nodded. We walked toward the house when we got closer we started to notice a dark figure standing at the door.
I recognised it instantly it was the thing that shot past us before.
As we got closer he vanished then some sort of portal opened up “What’s happening?” I yelled as we got pulled into it.
Then suddenly it was dead silence “where are we?” I asked my friend...
I love this weeks 100wc. I love your scary story and you could use some punctuation. You did a super job. Good job
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