Me and my friend as u know we have been making friends “wait wait wait!” wote is that over there hay can u zome up ok let me see it is tall it is pink it sang in the it's painful to listen to it a a a pink giraffe i said to it are u a zombie yas i am a zombie my friend said will haft to kill u i said stop don’t shoot him but he's a zombie that dissent mater he's special like us...
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