Thursday, February 27, 2020

100WC-Week #22 - Ella

Once upon a time there was a little girl singing sitting on my skateboard chewing my bubblegum chew. Chew chew swinging my yo-yo we we and then she hured a BIG bang and she screamed aaaaaaaaa!!!.
And then the doorbell rang ring ring ring and over and over the doorbell rang and rang  but  she was.
To scared to open the door but she forgot to lock the door and suddenly the door swung open and a lot of. Wind came in the house she screamed agen aaaaaa
But even louder this time the neighbours turned into zombies and she...

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  1. Michelle Team 100WCMarch 2, 2020 at 3:49 PM

    Hi Ella,
    Yikes, the idea of the neighbours turning into zombies is pretty terrifying. The 'she.....' ending makes me think that it didn't end well!
    One thing I wasn't sure of was whether the little girl was sitting on the skateboard inside or outside the house. It sounds like she must have been inside because you mention that she'd forgotten to lock the door. Is that right?
    Thank you for sharing.
    Michelle, Team 100wc,
    Melbourne, Australia

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  2. AnonymousApril 14, 2020 at 4:03 PM

    thank you verry much

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