Tuesday, February 4, 2020

100WC - Week #19- Charlie

I will go home and spend a  hour at home then I will come into town and try to get into a shop. It was not very busy in town. I just do not know. It is very quiet. I am getting very scared. No one is here where is everyone. I hear  someone coming over my shoulder. Is this a surprise i am very scared now  lights are on in one shop and the other and in the other. People are in the street now where did you go I said. It was a day off you should’ve told me

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