Giraffe Pink Dusty Sang Painful
Lets go to the zoo said mum , can we bring our cousins my sister shouted from the kitchen. Yes we can I will call them right now so I don't forget. So mum called them and they were excited to come. We picked them up from their house. It was good they lived close to the zoo . We walked into the zoo. It was very dusty, maybe a lion ran past . The first thing I saw was a pink Giraffe. It didn't look very sick. The animal paramedics put a painful jab I sang to it to make it happy.
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