Tuesday, February 11, 2020

100WC-Week#20-Mia

"Arrrgh!!!" I scream, "Dad what was that." "I don't know" He said as he made dinner. "Can you set the table" As I went to set the table, I saw it again. "Dad!! Its there again!!" I yelled, but as soon as he got to the window it was gone. "What do you think it was?" I asked Dad as I ate my potatoes. " I don't know… but there it is again!!" Dad jumped to the window. As it flew towards us, I couldn't see what it was… "Its a plane!!" I yell.
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