The Door
So we were in the shed and we heard a noise behind the door but Dad and Mum said not to go behind the door cause it's dangerous.
We just got the house and the old owners said not to go behind that door well at least one of us listen Linkin not me so I started to approach the door and all of a sudden “MUM DAD” Linkin ran to them and they shouted at me and “ADDISON” oh no i'm screwed well we will never will know unless I open the door and there was nothing but…
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