Thursday, February 13, 2020
100WC - Week#20 - Hannah
I was sitting by a tree, looking at the sky. As it flew towards me I couldn’t see what it was but I knew it was black when I heard a scream I ran away to the scream but…. The black was running after me. Something grabbed my leg and I could not look back. I knew if I look back I will fall. If I fell I the black would get me. I would become part of the black shadow. It’s starting to close in on me.
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that is good
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