Monday, February 24, 2020
100WC - Week #22 - Kenneth
There I was, the door in front of me. I push it a bit open, I hear a slight creek. “No one’s here.” I thought. I entered the house, hoping to stay far away from the outdoors wilderness. I looked in a room, all I saw was dust. Until I noticed a painting… But it's me and my family. I exit the room worried. BANG! Someone kicked down the door, I ran into a nearby room and was fortunate enough to find a bed. I decided to hide underneath the bed protecting me from whoever is lurking in this house...
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