Thursday, February 20, 2020
100WC-week 21 Aiden
Today I was on my way to my friend's house when a duck flew into my car window. “Woah I say” as it sits on the passenger seat quack! quack! Next thing you know a pink car came speeding! Past me and then 3 police cars came speeding! Past me “omg I say”. A really dusty sand storm” I yell then something sang a really painful song that hypnotised me into making me quack like a duck quack! Worst day ever. Once I got there I looked like a duck so he said what happened to you nothing I said.
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hi Aiden,I really liked the part where a duck flew Into your car. why did you look like a duck at the end?
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