Thursday, February 13, 2020

William-100WC-Week #20

It was September 11 2001 and me and my family  were visiting the twin towers for my birthday. “I'm hungry” I told mum. OK you can go get some food she answered. “Can I come '' Jack yelled. “Yes”, “but hang on i'll just get you some money”, mum handed me a 10 dollar note “how come he gets to hold it “ Jack complained.because he wont drop it . as we headed up the escalator I looked out the window I saw something weird looking in the sky as it headed toward us. I couldn't see what it was. Oh no!!.......
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2020 at 12:23 PM

    Hi William
    I like this story.
    It was funny when jack could not hold it because he was not responsible.I like the cliffhanger.
    From Milah

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2020 at 12:23 PM

    Hi William
    I like this story.
    It was funny when jack could not hold it because he was not responsible.I like the cliffhanger.
    From Milah

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