Wednesday, February 12, 2020

Chloe - 100 WC - Week #20

“Hi Bob” “Hi Joe are you ready for the concert tonight?” “not really Bob I need a chair”  “don’t  buy one I have a lots” “wait what is that? Joe I do not know is it a …..ummm ….a bee? no it is flying towards us….”.As it flew towards us I couldn’t see what it was. “Maybe it’s a fly?  No, it is too big! Is it a flying monkey?  No! lets get ready for the concert tonight. Ok im going to go to your place. Ok Joe. Hey it is sill flying at us….. Stop!…”
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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2020 at 12:49 PM

    Hi Chloe i like how bob and joe are in the story keep it up

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 12, 2020 at 12:52 PM

    Hi Chloe.
    Great work keep on writing amazing storys!
    From Harry.

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 24, 2020 at 12:57 PM

    To Chloe,
    I liked how you used heps of full stops in your story and yes it might be a fly.
    From Carla

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