Tuesday, February 4, 2020
100WC -week #19 -Ella
My story starts here on saturday nothing was open because there was a BIG!!! Monster and I saw the powerpuff girls from off cartoon network on tv omg! I said mum mum look it is .the powerpuff girls from cartoon network tv mum said wow!!! It is too, they're going to fight the. BIG!! Monster i said yay this is the best day ever the powerpuff girls stopped at our house and they rang the doorbell i opened the door they said are you okay me and my mum said yes they said ok do you need any food water no thanks.
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Hi Ella that is great writing. I love how the powerpuff girls saved the day.
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Hi Ella
ReplyDeletei really liked your writing i liked the bit that had the powerpuff girls.
From Harry.
Thank you Harry if you go to week #20 i have written you a text on that from Ella
ReplyDeleteOkay i will go to check Ella thank you by the way!
DeleteFrom Harry.
your welcome Harry
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