“Fine my name is Olivia Davidson!!” she yells. I think for a moment, am I safe?? I don't know… “Wait a minute… your my best friend!!” I yell as she opens the door. “ Happy Halloween!!” she says. “Do you like it?” Olivia asks.
Monday, February 24, 2020
100WC - Week #22 - Mia
Knock knock knock, I knock on the door, but no one answers. “Go away! And leave me alone!!” A voice yells from behind the door. “Well i need to come in , because i need to write a story about someone, its my homework!!!” I yell back. “Just tell me your name and I will go!!” I yell.
“Fine my name is Olivia Davidson!!” she yells. I think for a moment, am I safe?? I don't know… “Wait a minute… your my best friend!!” I yell as she opens the door. “ Happy Halloween!!” she says. “Do you like it?” Olivia asks.
“Fine my name is Olivia Davidson!!” she yells. I think for a moment, am I safe?? I don't know… “Wait a minute… your my best friend!!” I yell as she opens the door. “ Happy Halloween!!” she says. “Do you like it?” Olivia asks.
4 comments:
I really liked . . . because . . .
I really liked the way you . . .
I enjoyed reading this because . . .
It was especially good when you . . . because . . .
I think you need to . . . because . . .
Next time you write . . .
Think about adding . . .
Have you thought about . . .
To improve your . . . try . . .
Perhaps you could . . .
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
-
I was in Sydney on my yearly visit. When the sun went down. I was trying to feel my way back to my apartment. When something pulled me bac...
-
One day there was a spiky fruit up in the tree, there was two big spiky fruits. I wondered “What is in that spiky fruit? “Maybe there... -
Our first time writing for 100WC This weeks prompt words are... shouted crimson misty frantically grave ...
I like the Halloween theme you're going for. It gives a nice texture of the story. I bet you did good on the homework assignment.
ReplyDelete-From Kenneth.
To Mia,
ReplyDeleteI like your story and how you used a Halloween theme.
The name Olivia Davidson reminds me of someone.
From Madi
Hi Madi,
DeleteHmm.. how could olivia davidson be off... I know! SW
I liked your story. I liked that you made it Halloween to switch it up.
ReplyDelete