Thursday, February 20, 2020

Kate - 100WC - Week #21




Mum come on. We got to meet Emma and Jess at the zoo. When we arrived we heard someone say the giraffe exhibit. when we realized that it was Jess we had found them. But we all heard a voice zoo is closing for the day. The night come the zoo was closed but we were still there. WHAT! The giraffe is turning pink? We started to fall asleep. Sorry.  The giraffe sang a song. We went to the lion he was rolling in the dust he was so dusty. Then he bite me it was so painful.
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  1. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2020 at 12:23 PM

    i realy like the graff kate keepit up

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 27, 2020 at 2:46 PM

    Hi Kate! awesome story keep up the good work. Don't stop writing
    From Joe

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