Monday, February 24, 2020

100WC#22-Joe

I was riding my bike on a dirt path but as soon as I turned my head around I saw an old house. I went up to it. There was a doorbell I was about to answer. But I thought what was behind it I think there might be a creature. I don't know why I'm here this is weird. I wonder who lives here it would be my granny if she left her old house. I don’t know if I'm safe here? I think I should go now I’m getting creeped out! Yeb I'm going now. Then I went back too my house and played.
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