Tuesday, February 11, 2020

100WC - Week #20 - Samara

 BANG!  As I  tried to forget that my parents were gone for good, I just couldn’t. I was holding my sister as tight as I could. I didn’t want to lose her too! My sister was screaming WAY too loud, I tried to keep her quiet, so no one would find as.But it was too late. I could hear people talking so the best thing I could do was go to sleep….  I woke up to hear nothing. when I saw something in the sky, as it flew towards us I couldn’t see what it was. The war was over we could finally go home.

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