The Medallion
It's 1901 in France, Paris,.....
“Newspaper's come get your Newspaper, ten pence each" yells a young seller boy.
“I’ll take one Paris soir”. he said as he handed some small coins to the boy.
“So why are you buying it anyway?” the boy asks.
“My maman said to me if I get her a newspaper she will let me explore with my friends in the woods. After this he ran back home as fast as his legs would take him he hadn't explored with his friends for ages. He opened the newspaper and there was a medallion in there.......
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