When I saw this door I was very scared it did not look like a good door. It was all black and I did not go in further. Where I was it was so scary I was thinking to myself why I came here. It was just too scary. I just do not know where to go next .I do not know where the exit I should just go home .But I do not know what way to go should I go that way or that way. I am going to go that way. By the way, I can go home.
Monday, February 24, 2020
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Charlie,
ReplyDeleteYour narrator seems to be rather indecisive, but I also saw a photo of the door, so I understand. Good job using the prompt to help you set the scene with your words. Keep writing.
Mrs. G., Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA